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刘蔚:赏析余杰[绍兴的鸭]1—六年高考1.54

刘蔚:赏析余杰[绍兴的鸭]1—六年高考1.54

   公友/民主人士/觉醒人士/普通百姓 刘蔚 2014年6月12日

   Wei Liu Memoir 1.54: Analyzing Yu Jie [Shaoxing Duck]1

   Human Rights Worker/Democratic People/Awakened People/Common PeopleWei Liu June 16, 2014

   不知各位看完余杰的这篇“绍兴的鸭”有何感想?我是觉得我的头脑非常享受。我们来看看余杰是怎么写绍兴的鸭的。他并不是一来就几个人坐在绍兴的饭馆里,猛吃大嚼,象很多人写进餐的文章那样。他先是写绍兴的路,接着是路上看到的绍兴的水,再由水想到的水中的鸭子。一下就让绍兴的鸭子有了绍兴的味道,有了特色。如果他采用很多人开头就是坐下来吃的写法,那就像是一顿没有特色的便饭了。

   How do you people think about Yu Jie’s [Shaoxing Duck]? I feel my brain has had a big pleasure. Let’s see how Yu Jie write about the duck. He does not begin the description with several people sitting at the restaurant in Shaoxing, gobbling, like many people’s writing. He first writes about the road in Shaoxing, then the water of Shaoxing he sees on the road, then from the water associating to the duck in the water. This gives Shaoxing duck to have Shaoxing flavor, a feature. If he had adopted the way of many other people that begins with sitting down in the restaurant, that would have been a common meal without any feature.

   接下去余杰开始描述鸭子的菜品了,那就是酱鸭。他是将口感与菜品的做法结合起来描述的。口感无非酸,甜,咸,辣等,而文中“我啃完肉,还忍不住慢慢地去啃骨头。”这也是口感。那么菜品的做法呢?顾客一般不知道菜是怎么做的,只是可以凭经验猜测。文中的“由于酱鸭腌制的时间很长,所以就好像老腊肉和牛肉干。”这就是作者对菜品做法的描述。如果酱鸭就写到这里,已经算完美。我们认为事物好到一定的程度就算完美了。如果写两个错别字,就不能算完美了,那是太苛求了。而余杰并没有到这里止步,而是再来一段侧面描写。就是宁萱基本上没动鸭子,吃的是茴香豆,作者基本上是一个人把一盘酱鸭吃光。这是用数量告诉读者/各位,酱鸭的妙处。

   Then Yu Jie moves to the dish made of duck, which is marinated duck. His description on it combines the taste and the cuisine. The taste is usually sour, sweet, salty, spicy, etc. And in the text, [Having nibbling down all the meat, I cannot help nibbling on the bones.] is also the taste. Then what is the cuisine? Usually the customer does not know how a dish is made, but can reckon it by experience. And [Owing to the long time of being marinated, the duck meat tastes like old preserved ham or beef jerky.] in the text is the description on the cuisine. Up to now, the description on marinated duck is already perfect for we hold that when a thing is good enough, then it is perfect. If a thing is regarded as imperfect for two wrong-spelt words, it will be too picky. And Yu Jie does not stop here and inputs another indirect descriptive paragraph. It is that Ning Xuan almost hasn’t touched the duck and just eats on the aniseed flavored beans, and the author almost eats up the entire plate of duck by himself. This is using the quantity to show people the goodness of the duck.

   到这里就是从文章标题到酱鸭写完,已经1000字了。单独作一篇文章,字数也够了。但余杰没有就此止步,而是又描述了麻鸭和百草炖老鸭两种鸭。这样对绍兴鸭子的描述就不再是一种鸭子,而是几种,有立体感了。

   From the title to the end of the marinated duck, it is already 500 words in English, which is enough for a single article. But Yu Jie does not stop here, and gives more description on another 2 kinds of duck dishes: the Brown Duck and Duck Stewed by Herb. Now the description on Shaoxing duck is no longer a single duck, but several kinds, giving people a round impression on duck.

   看看作者描述的第二种鸭子麻鸭。那麻鸭就是用麻绳捆着在水里煮。许多来写会这么写,然后写麻鸭吃起来很软,基本上就完了。读者没有什么期待,似乎只是接受着彼此没有联系的信息,没有听完一句还要听下一句的感觉。看看余杰是怎么写的?麻鸭需不需要用刀切块贯穿该部分的始终。从[我问大妈:“这鸭需不需要切开呢?”大妈笑了笑说:“不用,这鸭都炖熟了,入口就化了。”]开始,多数读者会想这鸭子是否真的不需要切?是否是商人不愿多一事,是否余杰买回去会呼上当,最后还要自己用刀切,或者用自己的牙齿与麻鸭来一场大战?在文中麻鸭的后部,作者写道:[果然,这只鸭子已经炖得非常熟了,入口不用咀嚼,轻轻用牙一咬就化了。]到此悬念最后解开,麻鸭不需要用刀切。

   Let’s see the description on the second duck Brown Duck. Brown Duck itself is just to use a string to tie the duck and boil it in water. Many people would write it that way and then the Brown Duck tastes so soft and that is about all, leaving the read no suspense, and the reader just receives a bunch of unrelated information, without the feeling of expecting what will happen next. Let’s see how Yu Jie do this? Whether the Brown Duck needs to be cut runs through the entire part of Brown Duck. From [I ask the old sale lady, “Does it need to cut the duck into pieces?” She laughs and says, “No, it does not need to. See, the duck is stewed for hours and will melt in your mouth once you bite on it.”] on, most readers would wonder whether the duck needs to be cut, whether the store does not want to offer extra service, whether Yu Jie would feel being fooled and finally have to cut it by himself after buying it, or his teeth have to have a hard time on the duck? Then in the latter part of the text, [Truly, the duck has been stewed fully and melts in my mouth without my teeth even biting on it.] Up to here, the suspense is solved that the Brown Duck does not need to be cut.

    六年高考1.54:“赏析余杰[绍兴的鸭]1”完

   《走过六年高考岁月》第1本书:《从出生到小学毕业》待续

   The end of “Wei Liu Memoir 1.54: Analyzing Yu Jie [Shaoxing Duck]1”

   Walking Through Six Years Examination/Wei Liu Exam Book One From Birth to the Graduation of Elementary School to be continued

    刘蔚:伟大的中国全民大革命2014/6

   公友/民主人士/觉醒人士/普通百姓 刘蔚 2014年6月1日

   Wei Liu: The Great All People Revolution in China June 2014

   Human Rights Worker/Democratic People/Awakened People/Common People

   Wei Liu June 1, 2014

    如果你还想你或你亲友每人拿回土地,住房,医疗,拿回包括公民税率,政府各方面开支等社会事务的表决权这些民主人权,你最好读完这篇长文。你可以从Google translate/谷歌翻译听文章的朗读。你可告诉你外国朋友/老师我写的英文。他们可以在google上用“Wei Liu Revolution” or “Wei Liu Exam”搜寻出我的文字。更多文章见我的海外博讯boxun网站的博客,加上前后的www, com 我名字在首页底部的作者群中。从2007年到2014年2月,我博客的显示点击量已达300万,而按博讯说的各博客的实际点击量是显示点击量的10倍以上,那我博客的实际点击量到2014年2月已达3000万。我们的文字是对中国民众说的,是我们认为真实的情况,欢迎各位,各媒体.转载,传播。一个人给5个以上人讲我们《伟大的中国全民大革命》中的1项国际公约,2项活动主张,4项基本人权,8项优秀活动,及本县/市政权楼等几个地址,民众兵器弹弓枪等起义事宜,壮大进步力量,救自己,救别人,救中国。

    If you want you or your friends in this life to get back the human rights of half an acre land, welfares of housing, medical care, the voting rights on the tax rate and the government budget, you’d better read through this long essay. Google translate can read text aloud for you. If you have foreign friends/teachers, you may tell them to read the English part of my essay. They can google me out by “Wei Liu Revolution” or “Wei Liu Exam”. More articles of mine can be seen in my blog at “boxun”, with “www” in the front and “com” in the back, my name Wei Liu/刘蔚 is at the bottom of the homepage. From 2007 to 2014, my blog has 3 million displayed visits, and the website says that the actual visits is 10 times as the displayed visits. Then the actual visits of my blog is 30 million. What we say here we hold is true and is for 1.3 billion Chinese people. Every one is welcomed to publish, to spread our words, one person tells 5 or more persons, about the 1 international convention, the 2 uprising opinions, the 4 fundamental human rights, the 8 excellent activities, the couple of addresses of the Communist regime buildings in the local county, the uprising elements like the slingshot of people’s weapon. Anyway, we expand the democratic strength to save ourselves, our friends and our country.

    1949年中共在中国掌权以来,掠夺全民土地,掠夺全民住房,食品,教育,医疗四项生存福利,然后把全民抛进战争,大跃进,文革,高考,无限物质,无限污染等一个又一个的角斗场里。毛泽东时代就害死了8千万中国人,包括1959年到1962年三年饥荒饿死的4千万人。2000年以来中国每年非正常死亡300万人以上,包括在打斗中死亡的100万人,200万人进行自杀。2010年代中国满18岁的10亿中国人的平均收入不过1年1万元人民币,工作30年,一生收入不过30万元人民币。而普通一套住房达到160万元,一人一生的食品费用达70万元,教育费用至少10万元,医疗费用至少10万元。一人一生的住房,食品,教育,医疗全部四项生存的费用在中共治下2010年代达160+70+10+10=250万元人民币。250万/30万>8。就是说普通百姓干8辈子也挣不到1辈子所需的住房等四项生存。同时,中国的环境崩溃了。民国时,北京周围100公里有80多条河流,地下水位在2米左右;2000年起看不到1条河流了,地下水位在约40米,70%以上的水面严重污染。1980年代以前,中国只有重庆,武汉,南京三大火炉,2000年起,夏天全国都成了火炉。冬天的雾霾里,3米外认不出熟人。全国25%的土壤重金属含量超标,种出来的农产品有毒。从1949年到2010年代中国的状况用八个字来形容就是“民不聊生,环境崩溃”。

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