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·回忆录1.75:葱段飞到我的眼睛
·Wei Liu Memoir 1.75: Green Onion Flies to My Eye
·香港占中活动当然是成功的—唤醒国人之395
·Wei Liu Revolution 395: Hongkong Occupying Is a Success
·才厚命薄聚秦城,计划永康皆泡汤—唤醒国人396
·Wei Liu Revolution 396—Xu, Bo, Ling, Zhou Meet in Qincheng Prison
·冰冷的水冲我的眼—六年高考1.76
·Wei Liu Memoir 1.76: Cold Water Rinse My Eye
·刘蔚回忆录1.77:我喜欢吃凉拌菜—六年高考
·Wei Liu Memoir 1.77: I Like Cold Dishes
·刘蔚:上海跨年夜踩踏事件—唤醒国人397
·Wei Liu Revolution 397: Trampling Event in Shanghai, Holiday
·刘蔚回忆录:邓小平谈思想僵化—六年高考1.78
·Wei Liu Memoir 1.78: Deng on Fixed Mind
·刘蔚回忆录1.79:中共十一大77年召开,为何78年有三中全会?—六年高
·Wei Liu Memoir 1.79: 11th Convention in 1977, Why 3rd Conference
·回忆录1.80:78年中央工作会议元老派vs华国锋—六年高考
·Wei Liu Memoir 1.80: 1978 Central Conference: Seniors vs Hua
·刘蔚:师长该是将军,张灵甫当然是抗日名将—唤醒国人398
·Wei Liu Revolution 398: Division Commander Should Be General, Zhang Li
·刘蔚回忆录1.81:越战使邓小平大权在握—六年高考
·Wei Liu Memoir 1.81: Vietnam War 1979 Let Deng in Full Power
·刘蔚回忆录1.82:毛思想是害人有理的土匪思想
·Wei Liu Memoir 1.82: Mao Idea Is People-Harming Gangster Idea
·刘蔚:习近平意图把中国拉回1950年代—唤醒国人399
·Wei Liu Revolution 399: Xi Wants to Drag China Back 1950s
·刘蔚:亡党亡国才好—唤醒国人之400
·Wei Liu Revolution 400: The Communist Collapsing Be People’s Pleasure
·为皮山起义欢呼!游击战开始了!
·Wei Liu Revolution 401: Acclaim! Uprising in Pishan, Xinjiang, Guerril
·刘蔚:致海内外华人的公开信—唤醒国人402
·Wei Liu Revolution 402: Open Letter to People in and out of China
·刘蔚:民众对中共进行游击战多年了—唤醒国人403
·Wei Liu Revolution 403: People’s Guerrilla War Against Communist for
·刘蔚:中国全民革命篇—唤醒国人之404
·Wei Liu Revolution 404: All-People Revolution in China
·刘蔚:客厅,饭厅救中国—唤醒国人之405
·Wei Liu Revolution 405: Talk in Living Room May Save China
·刘蔚回忆录1.83:中共政治学习显示其祸国殃民
·Wei Liu Memoir 1.83: Communist Political Study Shows it Harming People
·刘蔚:人类300年的物质时代该结束了—六年高考1.84
·Wei Liu Memoir 1.84: Human 300-Year Material Age Should End Now
·刘蔚回忆录1.85:无限物质带给人无限苦难—六年高考
·Wei Liu Memoir 1.85: Endless Production Brings Endless Tribulation
·刘蔚回忆录1.86:读书不挣一分钱才好—六年高考
·Wei Liu Memoir 1.86: Good for Reading, Not Making a Penny
·刘蔚:欢呼!三退人数突破了两亿—唤醒国人之406
·Wei Liu Revolution 406: Acclaim! 200 Million Chinese Denounced Communi
·回忆录1.87:物质/财富只是一包药—六年高考
·Wei Liu Memoir 1.87: Material/Wealth Is Merely Drugs
·小二语文老师讲故事—六年高考
·Wei Liu Memoir 1.88: Chinese Teacher Story Telling 2nd Grade
·贺龙菜刀革命与中共无关--六年高考
·Wei Liu Memoir 1.89: He Long’s Knife Revolution Has Nothing to Do wit
·刘蔚:刘晓波经历的重大意义—唤醒国人407
·Wei Liu Revolution 407: The Great Significance of Liu Xiaobo’s Experi
·我要做当代杜甫,书写民众的疾苦—唤醒国人之408
·Wei Liu Revolution 408: I Want to Be Today’s Du Fu,
·中共在98%以上的镇没有驻军
·Wei Liu Memoir 1.90: Over 98% of Towns in China No Communist Forces
·不怕中共分散驻军—六年高考
·Wei Liu Memoir 1.91: Not Afraid Communist Spread Out Garrison
·刘蔚:唐朝从不认为杜甫是反唐反华人士—唤醒国人409
·Wei Liu Revolution 409: Tang Dynasty Never Regard Du Fu as Anti-Tang P
·“东方之星”船难全探讨—唤醒国人之410
·Wei Liu Revolution 410: What Happened on the Sunk Eastern Star in Chin
·刘蔚:真正乐观的是普通百姓—唤醒国人之411
·Wei Liu Revolution 411: The Real Optimistic Is Common People
·民众镇级起义同样留芳百世—六年高考
·Wei Liu Memoir 1.92: Town Uprising Will Make History
·困在3000点的亿万股民,遥望5000点哭了—唤醒国人之412
·Wei Liu Revolution 412: 100 Million Stock People Slump from 5000 Point
·刘蔚回忆录1.93:中国每年每县700人自杀--六年高考
·Wei Liu Memoir 1.93: 700 People Suicide Every County Every Year in Ch
·刘蔚:股市跌穿4千点,1亿股民要革命—唤醒国人之413
·Wei Liu Revolution 413: Stock Market Below 4000 Points, 100 Million St
·刘蔚回忆录1.94:请广传两项起义主张—六年高考
·Wei Liu Memoir 1.94: Spread Our Two Uprising Views—Six Years Examinat
·刘蔚:天津大爆炸真相探讨1—唤醒国人之414
·Wei Liu Revolution 414: Seek the Truth of Tianjin Huge Explosion 1
·刘蔚:天津大爆炸多半就是核弹爆炸了
·Wei Liu Revolution 415: The Major Explosion in Tianjin Likely to Be Nu
·刘蔚:天津大爆炸象是精心策划的行动—天津大爆炸真相探讨3
·Wei Liu Revolution 416: The Massive Explosion in Tianjin Likely to Be
·刘蔚回忆录1.95:艰难学唱少先队队歌
·Wei Liu Memoir 1.95: Try Hard to Learn the Young Pioneer Song
·刘蔚:股市失守三千点大关,暴力救市完败了—唤醒国人之417
·Wei Liu Revolution 417: The Stock Market Lost the Deadline of 3000,
·刘蔚:四大引擎齐熄火,中国经济完蛋了—唤醒国人之418
·Wei Liu Revolution 418: Four Engines Dead, Economy in China Dead
·刘蔚:仍然认为天津大爆炸多半是核爆—唤醒国人之419
·Wei Liu Revolution 419: Tianjin Explosion Is Likely to Be Nuclear
·刘蔚:谈谈左轮手枪的使用—唤醒国人之420
·Wei Liu Revolution 420: How to Use a Revolver
·刘蔚:陈独秀1929年被开除了党籍-六年高考/刘蔚回忆录1.96
·Wei Liu Memoir 1.96: Chen Duxiu Is Dismissed from the Communist Party
·胡建国是九三阅兵的最大亮点
·Wei Liu Revolution 421: Rights-Seeking Individual of Shanghai Is the B
·刘蔚:九三阅兵显示中共军是纸老虎—唤醒国人之422
·Wei Liu Revolution 422: Military Parade in 2015 Show Communist
·刘蔚:民主人士,大法弟子最懂生活—唤醒国人之423
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Wei Liu Memoir 1.55: Analyzing Yu Jie [Shaoxing Duck]2

刘蔚:赏析余杰[绍兴的鸭]2—六年高考1.55

   公友/民主人士/觉醒人士/普通百姓 刘蔚 2014年6月26日

   Wei Liu Memoir 1.55: Analyzing Yu Jie [Shaoxing Duck]2

   Human Rights Worker/Democratic People/Awakened People/Common PeopleWei Liu June 26, 2014

   我们看看余杰写麻鸭部分的文字就600来字,其中居然还有一条麻鸭是否需要切的线索,时时抓住读者。按理讲,600来字也是初中生作文要求的字数长度,是不需要线索的,3000字以上的中篇作品,长篇作品才需要线索。余杰在这么短的文字内也安排线索,抓住读者,不愧是中国1949年以来文字最好的四位之一。其它三位,我不知道,观众自己去评吧。

   We see Yu Jie’s words on Brown Duck are just 600 Chinese characters, about 300 English words if translated into English, and there is even a thread in it that whether the Brown Duck needs to be cut, which keeps the reader’s interest. Generally speaking, 300 English words is just the length for junior high students and it does not need a thread. Only works over 1,500 English words needs a thread. And Yu Jie arranges thread in such short story as well, keeping the reader interested. It is all right to say that he is one of four top writers in China since 1949. Who are the other three? I don’t know and leave that to the audience to comment.

   接下去该是第三种鸭了。而在写第三种鸭之前,余杰来一段对绍兴的茶店,酒店名称的感受,让读者肠胃方面的感受休息一下,不然,连吃三只鸭子,人也不大好受。

   The next should be the third kind of duck. Before it, Yu Jie puts down a paragraph on the feelings on the teahouse and restaurant in Shaoxing, and lets the reader’s stomach to have a rest. Otherwise, one would feel too much if eating three ducks in a roll.

   接着就是第三种鸭“百草炖老鸭”了。作者对此主要从菜品的做法上描述,写道:[神仙鸭一般选用老母鸭,先不加任何作料,装入一种叫“神仙罐”的长颈瓦罐中,隔水用文火清炖。炖到半熟的时候,加入各种各样的作料、补药,如当归、人参、大枣、枸杞、八角等,继续炖到十成火候。这样炖的老鸭原汁连一滴都没有损失,不仅味道鲜美,而且最具滋补效果。]

   Next is the third kind of duck Old Duck Stewed by Herb. The author’s words are mainly on the cuisine of it, [Holy Duck is usually old female duck. The duck is put into a slim earthen pot, stewed on low heat for long time, without any water or ingredients. When the duck is cooked half way through, add all kinds of ingredients, herbs, including angelica, ginseng, dates, wolfberry, aniseed. Then keep stewing until it is fully done. Then the original sauce is all kept without any loss. This is not only delicious but also nutritious.]

   以上就是余杰描述的绍兴的三种鸭。三种鸭的写法都不同。酱鸭主要是口感和做法,麻鸭主要为是否需要切块的线索,百草炖老鸭主要为菜品的做法。以什么为主要或以什么为特色,需要从读者和作者两方面考虑。读者需要什么信息或者说对什么感兴趣?作者又具备哪些知识和感受?

   The above are the three kinds of duck Yu Jie describes, having three different ways to write about three different ducks. Marinated duck is mainly on the taste and the cuisine; Brown Duck is mainly on the thread of whether it needs to be cut; Old Duck Stewed by Herb is mainly on the cuisine. Using what to be the feature needs to consider both the reader and the author? What kind of information does the reader want or get interested? What kind of knowledge and feeling does the author have?

   文学与数学一样,解法常常不止一种。说得广泛点,对其它菜品,鱼,虾,猪,鸡,蔬菜,面条,米饭都适用。一个人可以对几种菜品都用口感来写,都用做法来写,都安排线索。

   Literature and math are the same and often have different solutions. To be more general, this works well with other food as well like fish, shrimp, pork, chicken, vegetable, noodle and rice. One can describe several dishes all by the taste or all by the cuisine or even all arranging the thread.

    六年高考1.55:“赏析余杰[绍兴的鸭]2”完

   《走过六年高考岁月》第1本书:《从出生到小学毕业》待续

   The end of Wei Liu Memoir 1.55: Analyzing Yu Jie [Shaoxing Duck]2

   Walking Through Six Years Examination/Wei Liu Exam Book One From Birth to the Graduation of Elementary School to be continued

    刘蔚:伟大的中国全民大革命

   公友/民主人士/觉醒人士/普通百姓 刘蔚 2014年6月1日

   Wei Liu: The Great All People Revolution in China June 2014

   Human Rights Worker/Democratic People/Awakened People/Common People

   Wei Liu June 1, 2014

    如果你还想你或你亲友每人拿回土地,住房,医疗,拿回包括公民税率,政府各方面开支等社会事务的表决权这些民主人权,你最好读完这篇长文。你可以从Google translate/谷歌翻译听文章的朗读。你可告诉你外国朋友/老师我写的英文。他们可以在google上用“Wei Liu Revolution” or “Wei Liu Exam”搜寻出我的文字。更多文章见我的海外博讯boxun网站的博客,加上前后的www, com 我名字在首页底部的作者群中。从2007年到2014年2月,我博客的显示点击量已达300万,而按博讯说的各博客的实际点击量是显示点击量的10倍以上,那我博客的实际点击量到2014年2月已达3000万。我们的文字是对中国民众说的,是我们认为真实的情况,欢迎各位,各媒体.转载,传播。一个人给5个以上人讲我们《伟大的中国全民大革命》中的1项国际公约,2项活动主张,4项基本人权,8项优秀活动,及本县/市政权楼等几个地址,民众兵器弹弓枪等起义事宜,壮大进步力量,救自己,救别人,救中国。

    If you want you or your friends in this life to get back the human rights of half an acre land, welfares of housing, medical care, the voting rights on the tax rate and the government budget, you’d better read through this long essay. Google translate can read text aloud for you. If you have foreign friends/teachers, you may tell them to read the English part of my essay. They can google me out by “Wei Liu Revolution” or “Wei Liu Exam”. More articles of mine can be seen in my blog at “boxun”, with “www” in the front and “com” in the back, my name Wei Liu/刘蔚 is at the bottom of the homepage. From 2007 to 2014, my blog has 3 million displayed visits, and the website says that the actual visits is 10 times as the displayed visits. Then the actual visits of my blog is 30 million. What we say here we hold is true and is for 1.3 billion Chinese people. Every one is welcomed to publish, to spread our words, one person tells 5 or more persons, about the 1 international convention, the 2 uprising opinions, the 4 fundamental human rights, the 8 excellent activities, the couple of addresses of the Communist regime buildings in the local county, the uprising elements like the slingshot of people’s weapon. Anyway, we expand the democratic strength to save ourselves, our friends and our country.

    1949年中共在中国掌权以来,掠夺全民土地,掠夺全民住房,食品,教育,医疗四项生存福利,然后把全民抛进战争,大跃进,文革,高考,无限物质,无限污染等一个又一个的角斗场里。毛泽东时代就害死了8千万中国人,包括1959年到1962年三年饥荒饿死的4千万人。2000年以来中国每年非正常死亡300万人以上,包括在打斗中死亡的100万人,200万人进行自杀。2010年代中国满18岁的10亿中国人的平均收入不过1年1万元人民币,工作30年,一生收入不过30万元人民币。而普通一套住房达到160万元,一人一生的食品费用达70万元,教育费用至少10万元,医疗费用至少10万元。一人一生的住房,食品,教育,医疗全部四项生存的费用在中共治下2010年代达160+70+10+10=250万元人民币。250万/30万>8。就是说普通百姓干8辈子也挣不到1辈子所需的住房等四项生存。同时,中国的环境崩溃了。民国时,北京周围100公里有80多条河流,地下水位在2米左右;2000年起看不到1条河流了,地下水位在约40米,70%以上的水面严重污染。1980年代以前,中国只有重庆,武汉,南京三大火炉,2000年起,夏天全国都成了火炉。冬天的雾霾里,3米外认不出熟人。全国25%的土壤重金属含量超标,种出来的农产品有毒。从1949年到2010年代中国的状况用八个字来形容就是“民不聊生,环境崩溃”。

    Abstract: Since 1949 the Communist Party came into power in China, it has been robbing all people of the land, of the welfare of housing, food, education and medical care. Mao Zedong’s age has caused 80 million Chinese people to death, including 40 million starved to death between 1959 and 1962. Since 2000, every year there are 3.2 million people died abnormally, including 1 million in fighting and 2 million committing suicide. In the 2010s, on average in China, one can make about 50,000 U. S. dollars in one’s life, but the expenses for the 4 livings of housing, food, education and medical care are about 420,000 U. S. dollars, which means even one works for 8 lifetimes, one cannot make a living in China for 1 lifetime. Meanwhile, China’s environment sees debacles. Before 1949, there were 80-odd rivers within 70 miles of Beijing, but since 2000, there is not a single river visible. Over 70% of the water surface in China sees heavy pollution. From 1949 to 2010s, China’s situation can be described as “hard to survive and environment debacle.

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