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刘蔚:赏析余杰[绍兴的鸭]2—六年高考1.55

刘蔚:赏析余杰[绍兴的鸭]2—六年高考1.55

   公友/民主人士/觉醒人士/普通百姓 刘蔚 2014年6月26日

   Wei Liu Memoir 1.55: Analyzing Yu Jie [Shaoxing Duck]2

   Human Rights Worker/Democratic People/Awakened People/Common PeopleWei Liu June 26, 2014

   我们看看余杰写麻鸭部分的文字就600来字,其中居然还有一条麻鸭是否需要切的线索,时时抓住读者。按理讲,600来字也是初中生作文要求的字数长度,是不需要线索的,3000字以上的中篇作品,长篇作品才需要线索。余杰在这么短的文字内也安排线索,抓住读者,不愧是中国1949年以来文字最好的四位之一。其它三位,我不知道,观众自己去评吧。

   We see Yu Jie’s words on Brown Duck are just 600 Chinese characters, about 300 English words if translated into English, and there is even a thread in it that whether the Brown Duck needs to be cut, which keeps the reader’s interest. Generally speaking, 300 English words is just the length for junior high students and it does not need a thread. Only works over 1,500 English words needs a thread. And Yu Jie arranges thread in such short story as well, keeping the reader interested. It is all right to say that he is one of four top writers in China since 1949. Who are the other three? I don’t know and leave that to the audience to comment.

   接下去该是第三种鸭了。而在写第三种鸭之前,余杰来一段对绍兴的茶店,酒店名称的感受,让读者肠胃方面的感受休息一下,不然,连吃三只鸭子,人也不大好受。

   The next should be the third kind of duck. Before it, Yu Jie puts down a paragraph on the feelings on the teahouse and restaurant in Shaoxing, and lets the reader’s stomach to have a rest. Otherwise, one would feel too much if eating three ducks in a roll.

   接着就是第三种鸭“百草炖老鸭”了。作者对此主要从菜品的做法上描述,写道:[神仙鸭一般选用老母鸭,先不加任何作料,装入一种叫“神仙罐”的长颈瓦罐中,隔水用文火清炖。炖到半熟的时候,加入各种各样的作料、补药,如当归、人参、大枣、枸杞、八角等,继续炖到十成火候。这样炖的老鸭原汁连一滴都没有损失,不仅味道鲜美,而且最具滋补效果。]

   Next is the third kind of duck Old Duck Stewed by Herb. The author’s words are mainly on the cuisine of it, [Holy Duck is usually old female duck. The duck is put into a slim earthen pot, stewed on low heat for long time, without any water or ingredients. When the duck is cooked half way through, add all kinds of ingredients, herbs, including angelica, ginseng, dates, wolfberry, aniseed. Then keep stewing until it is fully done. Then the original sauce is all kept without any loss. This is not only delicious but also nutritious.]

   以上就是余杰描述的绍兴的三种鸭。三种鸭的写法都不同。酱鸭主要是口感和做法,麻鸭主要为是否需要切块的线索,百草炖老鸭主要为菜品的做法。以什么为主要或以什么为特色,需要从读者和作者两方面考虑。读者需要什么信息或者说对什么感兴趣?作者又具备哪些知识和感受?

   The above are the three kinds of duck Yu Jie describes, having three different ways to write about three different ducks. Marinated duck is mainly on the taste and the cuisine; Brown Duck is mainly on the thread of whether it needs to be cut; Old Duck Stewed by Herb is mainly on the cuisine. Using what to be the feature needs to consider both the reader and the author? What kind of information does the reader want or get interested? What kind of knowledge and feeling does the author have?

   文学与数学一样,解法常常不止一种。说得广泛点,对其它菜品,鱼,虾,猪,鸡,蔬菜,面条,米饭都适用。一个人可以对几种菜品都用口感来写,都用做法来写,都安排线索。

   Literature and math are the same and often have different solutions. To be more general, this works well with other food as well like fish, shrimp, pork, chicken, vegetable, noodle and rice. One can describe several dishes all by the taste or all by the cuisine or even all arranging the thread.

    六年高考1.55:“赏析余杰[绍兴的鸭]2”完

   《走过六年高考岁月》第1本书:《从出生到小学毕业》待续

   The end of Wei Liu Memoir 1.55: Analyzing Yu Jie [Shaoxing Duck]2

   Walking Through Six Years Examination/Wei Liu Exam Book One From Birth to the Graduation of Elementary School to be continued

    刘蔚:伟大的中国全民大革命

   公友/民主人士/觉醒人士/普通百姓 刘蔚 2014年6月1日

   Wei Liu: The Great All People Revolution in China June 2014

   Human Rights Worker/Democratic People/Awakened People/Common People

   Wei Liu June 1, 2014

    如果你还想你或你亲友每人拿回土地,住房,医疗,拿回包括公民税率,政府各方面开支等社会事务的表决权这些民主人权,你最好读完这篇长文。你可以从Google translate/谷歌翻译听文章的朗读。你可告诉你外国朋友/老师我写的英文。他们可以在google上用“Wei Liu Revolution” or “Wei Liu Exam”搜寻出我的文字。更多文章见我的海外博讯boxun网站的博客,加上前后的www, com 我名字在首页底部的作者群中。从2007年到2014年2月,我博客的显示点击量已达300万,而按博讯说的各博客的实际点击量是显示点击量的10倍以上,那我博客的实际点击量到2014年2月已达3000万。我们的文字是对中国民众说的,是我们认为真实的情况,欢迎各位,各媒体.转载,传播。一个人给5个以上人讲我们《伟大的中国全民大革命》中的1项国际公约,2项活动主张,4项基本人权,8项优秀活动,及本县/市政权楼等几个地址,民众兵器弹弓枪等起义事宜,壮大进步力量,救自己,救别人,救中国。

    If you want you or your friends in this life to get back the human rights of half an acre land, welfares of housing, medical care, the voting rights on the tax rate and the government budget, you’d better read through this long essay. Google translate can read text aloud for you. If you have foreign friends/teachers, you may tell them to read the English part of my essay. They can google me out by “Wei Liu Revolution” or “Wei Liu Exam”. More articles of mine can be seen in my blog at “boxun”, with “www” in the front and “com” in the back, my name Wei Liu/刘蔚 is at the bottom of the homepage. From 2007 to 2014, my blog has 3 million displayed visits, and the website says that the actual visits is 10 times as the displayed visits. Then the actual visits of my blog is 30 million. What we say here we hold is true and is for 1.3 billion Chinese people. Every one is welcomed to publish, to spread our words, one person tells 5 or more persons, about the 1 international convention, the 2 uprising opinions, the 4 fundamental human rights, the 8 excellent activities, the couple of addresses of the Communist regime buildings in the local county, the uprising elements like the slingshot of people’s weapon. Anyway, we expand the democratic strength to save ourselves, our friends and our country.

    1949年中共在中国掌权以来,掠夺全民土地,掠夺全民住房,食品,教育,医疗四项生存福利,然后把全民抛进战争,大跃进,文革,高考,无限物质,无限污染等一个又一个的角斗场里。毛泽东时代就害死了8千万中国人,包括1959年到1962年三年饥荒饿死的4千万人。2000年以来中国每年非正常死亡300万人以上,包括在打斗中死亡的100万人,200万人进行自杀。2010年代中国满18岁的10亿中国人的平均收入不过1年1万元人民币,工作30年,一生收入不过30万元人民币。而普通一套住房达到160万元,一人一生的食品费用达70万元,教育费用至少10万元,医疗费用至少10万元。一人一生的住房,食品,教育,医疗全部四项生存的费用在中共治下2010年代达160+70+10+10=250万元人民币。250万/30万>8。就是说普通百姓干8辈子也挣不到1辈子所需的住房等四项生存。同时,中国的环境崩溃了。民国时,北京周围100公里有80多条河流,地下水位在2米左右;2000年起看不到1条河流了,地下水位在约40米,70%以上的水面严重污染。1980年代以前,中国只有重庆,武汉,南京三大火炉,2000年起,夏天全国都成了火炉。冬天的雾霾里,3米外认不出熟人。全国25%的土壤重金属含量超标,种出来的农产品有毒。从1949年到2010年代中国的状况用八个字来形容就是“民不聊生,环境崩溃”。

    Abstract: Since 1949 the Communist Party came into power in China, it has been robbing all people of the land, of the welfare of housing, food, education and medical care. Mao Zedong’s age has caused 80 million Chinese people to death, including 40 million starved to death between 1959 and 1962. Since 2000, every year there are 3.2 million people died abnormally, including 1 million in fighting and 2 million committing suicide. In the 2010s, on average in China, one can make about 50,000 U. S. dollars in one’s life, but the expenses for the 4 livings of housing, food, education and medical care are about 420,000 U. S. dollars, which means even one works for 8 lifetimes, one cannot make a living in China for 1 lifetime. Meanwhile, China’s environment sees debacles. Before 1949, there were 80-odd rivers within 70 miles of Beijing, but since 2000, there is not a single river visible. Over 70% of the water surface in China sees heavy pollution. From 1949 to 2010s, China’s situation can be described as “hard to survive and environment debacle.

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